Boy, I bet the Windy City will never be the same
The first image doesn't work for me because it seems that the wall, window, and the sky in it are in sharper focus then you are. As far as I'm concerned you are more important then the other stuff so it should be you in sharper focus or at least as in focus as the rest of the image. Great idea and set up but lacking a little in post production.
The second one is fine but doesn't do anything for me nor does it illicit any response in me. Everything ties in to create a mood but it just makes me go "eh". Maybe if it was in color like the third image...
The third one is one of your best images ever. Great styling and it is most definitly is an aspect of you.
You have grown immensely since we started years ago and I have no doubt that you haven't reached your full potential yet. Hope to see more images from the trip here soon. Great job and get your butt to Oswego ASAP.
