Ooohh, Mr. Hatch...sometimes you make me angry...so very angry...
Just kidding
The lady asked for a critique. This is just my opinion, worth exactly 2 cents and I'm sure there are others that would disagree which is well within their rights. Here goes:
Red lingerie - Nice concept but I would watch out for the tight crops. "Amputated" limbs can be a distraction at times. While the missing hands and feet don't bother me too much in this pic, the missing right leg does.
The black and white with 2 other models. Months ago you posted new work of yourself and other models. They were nice but the idea is to promote yourself in your portfolio and, in those images, you were kinda "lost in the crowd." This image employs the multiple model concept but leaves no doubt who the star is. I like this one a lot in terms of concept and pose. I would like to see if your hair can be burned in a little as the light behind it is washing it out a little too much imho.
Black and white solo shot - very nice. If anything perhaps a little burn on the bricks between your head and breasts.
Headshot - Nice. The bit lip brings a little personality into the shot. For an actual portfolio headshot tho you might want to get one without biting your lip. They like them plain and straightforward with a smile.
Swimsuit - To me this reads too bottom heavy. No, that is not a polite way of saying too heavy weight-wise but rather that the emphasis is too much on the butt and below due to the pose. Your upper body is pulled away from the camera and your feet are firmly planted which puts weight on the legs. This all adds to a look that you are a pyramid shape. I am also bothered by the strip of land that "sticks" into your right side. The chin and shoulder merge. Perhaps the camera should be a little higher to lessen distortion and positioned so that nothing but water is behind you. Pose-wise I would suggest that you don't turn so far away lower body wise from the camera. When you do then you really have to crank around back towards the camera which causes everyone to lean away from the camera.
Again, this is only my ramblings and not meant in any way as "slams". Lord knows I have made, and continue to make, mistakes so I am not holding mself up as untouchable.
Please continue to post your work

I will post some of mine in the very near future